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2021-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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a bout the moving and my new hose and my scholl it is very exiting i cant wait! I am excited a bout I am now eleven and the forh grade i whant new frends and a new teacere it will be good and also very exciting.

강사 첨삭

Hola Ruby!
I am sure, you are excited to move into your new house and be in your own bedroom. I think your room will be full of books! ^ ^
-Rachel 
a bout the moving and my new hose and my scholl it is very exiting i cant wait!
>> I can\'t wait and I am excited to see my new house and my new school. 
I am excited a bout I am now eleven and the forh grade
>> I am excited to be in the fourth grade as an 11 year old student. 
i whant new frends and a new teacere it will be good and also very exciting.
>>I want to meet new friends and new teachers, so it will be exciting. 

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