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2021-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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What are the best things about being a child? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences. -> The best things about being a child are joking and playing lots of times. If you joke to another people, you can be a child. And if you play lots of times, you can be a child too.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]. Good job doing your homework today. Yes, you are still a child so enjoy it while you can.^^ Have a good night. See you in class tomorrow. ~Teacher Jane c\",)


The best things about being a child are joking and playing lots of times.
>> CORRECT =)

If you joke to another people, you can be a child.
>> If you joke with other people you can be a child.

And if you play lots of times, you can be a child too.
>> CORRECT =)

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