homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-What is your perception about \"time\"- (^-^)
I think time is like gold
and time is fair to all of people.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenny! Thank you for spending a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
You have a good perception about time. But I hope, you can give more sentences so you can practice your writing skills more! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>CORRECT
and time is fair to all of people.
and time is fair to all of people.
>>And time is fair to everyone. OR
>>All of us are given 24 hours everyday.
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