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Q) What\'s somthing that you are pround of in your life? why?
A)
When I was working at the hospital, taking care of patients were difficult at times.
But it was incredibly rewarding for me.
So, I am very proud of my experiences as a nurse.
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But it was incredibly rewarding for me.
So, I am very proud of my experiences as a nurse.
When I was working at the hospital, taking care of patients were difficult at times.
>> The thing that I\'m most proud of was when I was working at the hospital taking care of patients during difficult times.
But it was incredibly rewarding for me.
>> It was incredibly rewarding for me.
So, I am very proud of my experiences as a nurse.
>> CORRECT
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