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2012-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Hellow, Ms jane! This is my homework. I think the homework levels are more and more like difficult. But I had been this enjoy, because nowaday i'm not so busy. - I made my sentences of homework 1. They rarely find a parking place near the shops. 2. In winter I fly to Florida with my parents. 3. They often have a cup of tea at the hotel at about three o'clock in the afternoon. 4. He could hardly ski last year. 5. She often late came to school in spring last year. Thank you so much, Ma'am!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Sir Steve! Thank you for your composition today. You are impressive! Keep up the good work! Take care and I\'ll talk to you later. T. JanE ^^ Hellow, Ms jane!>> Hello, Ms. [Name]!This is my homework.>> Correct I think the homework levels are more and more like difficult.>> I think the level of the homework is getting more difficult.But I had been this enjoy, because nowaday i\'m not so busy.>> However, I enjoy answering them because these days I\'m not so busy.- I made my sentences of homework>> I made these sentences for my homework.1. They rarely find a parking place near the shops.>> Correct 2. In winter I fly to Florida with my parents.>> Sometimes, I fly to Florida with my parents in winter.3. They often have a cup of tea at the hotel at about three o\'clock in the afternoon.>> Correct 4. He could hardly ski last year.>> Correct 5. She often late came to school in spring last year.>> She often came late to school in spring last year.Thank you so much, Ma\'am! >> Correct

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