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2021-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What food would you like to eat everyday and not get tired of? -> I would like to eat salmon everyday and not get tired of. First, I like salmon the most in the food of the world. Second, I don\'t get tired of eating salmon.

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 I would like to eat salmon everyday and not get tired of.
>>CORRECT

First, I like salmon the most in the food of the world.
>> It is my favorite food in the world that\'s why I won\'t get tired of it. 

Second, I don\'t get tired of eating salmon
>> Connect with the sentence above. 

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