homework
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I think young people are independent from each other. Because, they believe the way to become an adult.
On the other hand, older people are dependent from each other.
Because of they need a help each other and they maybe think the way they live together.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
I think young people are independent from each other.
>>> CORRECT
Because, they believe the way to become an adult.
>>> Because, they believe on the ways to become an adult.
On the other hand, older people are dependent from each other.
On the other hand, older people are dependent from each other.
>>> CORRECT
Because of they need a help each other and they maybe think the way they live together.
Because of they need a help each other and they maybe think the way they live together.
>>> Because they need a help from each other and they may be thinking of living together.
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