HOMEWORK
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What kind of music do you listen to when you want to relax? Why?
-> I listen to ballad when I want to relax.
First, I like hip-hop the most, but listening to hip-hop doesn\'t make me stable.
Second, I like some ballad songs very much.
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First, I like hip-hop the most, but listening to hip-hop doesn\'t make me stable.
Second, I like some ballad songs very much.
I listen to ballad when I want to relax.
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First, I like hip-hop the most, but listening to hip-hop doesn\'t make me stable.
>> First, I like hip-hop the most but listening to it doesn\'t make me stable.
Second, I like some ballad songs very much.
>> Lastly, I like some ballad songs very much.
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