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I think It is more advantages.
Because schoolchildren can learn the importance of like by raising animals and vegetables.
Also, learn how to protect them.
However It\'s not has advantages.
If die raising them, they can be shocked.
But I think it is better to learn once, because there are more advantages.
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I think It is more advantage.
>>> CORRECT
Because schoolchildren can learn the importance of like by raising animals and vegetables.
Because schoolchildren can learn the importance of like by raising animals and vegetables.
>>> Because schoolchildren can learn the importance of raising animals and vegetables.
Also, learn how to protect them.
Also, learn how to protect them.
>>> CORRECT
However It\'s not has advantages.
However It\'s not has advantages.
>>> However, it doesn\'t have advantages.
If die raising them, they can be shocked.
If die raising them, they can be shocked.
>>> If they die when raising them, they could be surprised.
But I think it is better to learn once, because there are more advantages.
But I think it is better to learn once, because there are more advantages.
>>> CORRECT
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