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What\'s the best choice you have ever done in your life?
-> My best choice I have ever done in my life was doing baseball.
First, I could keep healthy my body because of doing baseball.
Second, I could make many friends because of doing baseball with them.
So I think my best choice I have ever done in my life was doing baseball.
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Second, I could make many friends because of doing baseball with them.
So I think my best choice I have ever done in my life was doing baseball
My best choice I have ever done in my life was doing baseball.
>> The best choice I have ever done was playing baseball.
First, I could keep healthy my body because of doing baseball.
>> First advantage is that I could keep my body healthy.
Second, I could make many friends because of doing baseball with them.
>> And lastly, I could make many friends because of this as well.
So I think my best choice I have ever done in my life was doing baseball
>> So I think this is the best choice I\'ve made in my life.
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