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What do you think of this saying, \"Possessions rot, rust, and decay but compassion lasts forever\"?
-> I think \"Possessions rot, rust, and decay but compassion lasts forever\" is a great saying.
First, every possession rot, rust, and decay when it spends lots of times.
But compassion is a heart, so it doesn\'t rot, rust, and decay, it just lasts forever.
So I think \"Possessions rot, rust, and decay but compassion lasts forever\" is a great saying.
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I think \"Possessions rot, rust, and decay but compassion lasts forever\" is a great saying.
First, every possession rot, rust, and decay when it spends lots of times.
But compassion is a heart, so it doesn\'t rot, rust, and decay, it just lasts forever.
So I think \"Possessions rot, rust, and decay but compassion lasts forever\" is a great saying.
>>CORRECT
First, every possession rot, rust, and decay when it spends lots of times.
>> First, possessions don\'t last forever.
But compassion is a heart, so it doesn\'t rot, rust, and decay, it just lasts forever.
>> But compassion does. Love lasts forever.
So I think \"Possessions rot, rust, and decay but compassion lasts forever\" is a great saying.
>> That\'s why I think that this is a great saying.
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