homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I prefer to live in a big city because I love to go to the theater and shopping and coffee shop. But we can’t find well such places in small town. If I live in country, I feel boring. And bus lacks in small town and there are not subway. I don’t want to wait bus for a long time and I prefer subway. Last, the biggest reason, many people live in big city and some of them are my family and my friends. If I live in country, it isn’t easy to go to meet them or many of people.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I\'m glad you did your homework. You have elaborated well your reasons of choosing the big city.
See you on class!
Teacher Michelle
I prefer to live in a big city because I love to go to the theater and shopping and coffee shop.
>>I prefer to live in a big city because I love to go the theater, shopping mall and coffee shop.
But we can’t find well such places in small town. If I live in country, I feel boring.
>>We can\'t find these places in a small town. If I live in a county, I feel bored.
And bus lacks in small town and there are not subway.
>>Small towns don\'t have subways and lacks busses.
I don’t want to wait bus for a long time and I prefer subway.
>>I don\'t want to wait for a bus to arrive for a long time that\'s why I prefer the subway.
Last, the biggest reason, many people live in big city and some of them are my family and my friends.
>>Most of all, the people living in the city are part of my family and some are my friends.
If I live in country, it isn’t easy to go to meet them or many of people.
>>That is why, if I live in a county, it would be hard for me to go and meet all of them.
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