homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-People say that money cannot buy happiness, but can you ever be truly happy without any money?- (^-^)
I think money and happy is very good^^
money can make me happy
Beacause I can buy something by money!
And I am become happy^^
But healthy is more important!!^^
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenny! Thanks for doing your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Keep on practicing your writing skills and try to improve more on it! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>I think having money is a good thing.
money can make me happy
money can make me happy
>>CORRECT (just capitalize \"Money and put a period at the end of the sentence: Money can make me happy.)
Beacause I can buy something by money!
Beacause I can buy something by money!
>>I can buy the things I want with money!
And I am become happy^^
And I am become happy^^
>>And I become happy.
But healthy is more important!!^^
But healthy is more important!!^^
>>But, health is the most important.
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