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2021-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What is the most difficult change you have ever had to make? -> The most difficult change I have ever had to make was changing the answer of important exam. First, I didn\'t change lot of things in my life. Second, I don\'t have any belief when I\'m changing my answer of important exam. So the most difficult change I have ever had to make was changing the answer of important exam.

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The most difficult change I have ever had to make was changing the answer of important exam.
>>The most difficult change I have ever had to make was changing the answers to an important exam.

First, I didn\'t change lot of things in my life.
>> CORRECT

Second, I don\'t have any belief when I\'m changing my answer of important exam.
>>Lastly, I don\'t feel confident whenever I change my answers on important exam.

So the most difficult change I have ever had to make was changing the answer of important exam
>> So I can say that this is the most difficult change I have done in my life. 

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