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2021-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What traits do you look for in a conversation partner? -> I look for partner\'s voice tone in a conversation partner. First, all people have each voice tone, so I can recognize someone with his voice tone. Second, listening and remembering someone\'s voice tone is fun to me. So I look for partner\'s voice tone in a conversation partner.

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I look for partner\'s voice tone in a conversation partner.

>> I look for the tone of voice in a conversation partner.

First, all people have each voice tone, so I can recognize someone with his voice tone.

>> First, voice tones differ from person to person so you can easily recognize who\'s is which.

Second, listening and remembering someone\'s voice tone is fun to me.

>> Lastly, listening and remembering someone\'s tone of voice is fun.

So I look for partner\'s voice tone in a conversation partner.

>> CORRECT

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