homework
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Beacuse older people and young people have different think.
Young people sometimes find it difficult to understand what older people think.
And I do, too.
We should try to accept each others thoughts because the times are different.
We also need to understand to changes according to the times.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Beacuse older people and young people have different think.
>>> Because older people and young people have different minds.
Young people sometimes find it difficult to understand what older people think.
Young people sometimes find it difficult to understand what older people think.
>>> CORRECT
And I do, too.
And I do, too.
>>> I also experience the same.
We should try to accept each others thoughts because the times are different.
We should try to accept each others thoughts because the times are different.
>>> CORRECT
We also need to understand the changes according to the times.
We also need to understand the changes according to the times.
>>> CORRECT
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