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I think it is many kids eat lots of anhelthy foods.
like ham burgur\'s they hav to eat vegetables and fruot.
and hav more exersise like walking skipping runing.
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Hello Ruby!
Yeah, kids love eating unhealthy foods, so they get sick and fat easily. It\'s good though because you love eating healthy foods, so keep it up! ^ ^
-Rachel
I think it is many kids eat lots of anhelthy foods.
>> I think many kids eat a lot of unhealthy foods.
like ham burgur\'s they hav to eat vegetables and fruot.
like ham burgur\'s they hav to eat vegetables and fruot.
>> Kids love hamburgers, but they have to eat vegetables and fruits.
and hav more exersise like walking skipping runing.
and hav more exersise like walking skipping runing.
>> They should also exercise more like taking a walk, skipping or running.
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