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2021-01-26 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What success have you had in this English class? What can you do to be more successful? -> I have had success in being good at pronunciation in this English class. Originally, my English pronunciation was unnatural, but my English pronunciation improved after having this English class. And I can succeed in listening to English in this English class. Because I can hear a lot of native speakers in this English class.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I have had success in being good at pronunciation in this English class.
>> CORRECT

Originally, my English pronunciation was unnatural, but my English pronunciation improved after having this English class.
>>CORRECT

And I can succeed in listening to English in this English class.
>> I can see myself succeed in listening to people speaking in English by this English class because I can hear a lot of native speakers in this English class. 

Because I can hear a lot of native speakers in this English class.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

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