homework
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The disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
Sometimes credit cards are discounted and I have heard that using moderately can improve credibility.
Credit cards are convenient because they can buy everything with the limit with a card.
So people tend to use their credit cards.
However, They spend more money on credit cards than on cash.
So they can become a credit defaulter.
To make a credit cards useful you need to be able to control it properly.
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
The disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
>>> CORRECT
Sometimes credit cards are discounted and I have heard that using it moderately can improve credibility.
Sometimes credit cards are discounted and I have heard that using it moderately can improve credibility.
>>> CORRECT
Credit cards are convenient because they can buy everything with the limit with a card.
Credit cards are convenient because they can buy everything with the limit with a card.
>>> Credit cards are convenient because people can buy anything with the card.
So people tend to use their credit cards.
So people tend to use their credit cards.
>>> CORRECT
However, they spend more money on credit cards than cash.
However, they spend more money on credit cards than cash.
>>> CORRECT
So they can become a credit defaulter.
So they can become a credit defaulter.
>>> CORRECT
To make credit cards useful you need to be able to control it properly.
To make credit cards useful you need to be able to control it properly.
>>> CORRECT
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