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Hmm.. I think sky diving will be like that. My teacher had a sky diving and she said it was very thrilling. Sky diving is a good thing that a person can challenge.
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Hmm.. I think sky diving will be like that.
>> Correct.
My teacher had a sky diving and she said it was very thrilling.
>> My teacher had sky diving experience and she said it was very thrilling.
Sky diving is a good thing that a person can challenge.
>> Sky diving is a good thing that a person can do like a challenge.
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