Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The last time l went to the park was two days ago
,and people can go on a date in the park
,chat with friends,eat a variety of foods
and buy dog walks
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!
(^_^)
Thank you for this composition.
I\'ve read it well and I have made some modifications.
Don\'t forget proper punctuation when writing a paragraph.
I will see you later in class.^^
__T. Mayleen :)
The last time l went to the park was two days ago
,and people can go on a date in the park
,chat with friends,eat a variety of foods
and buy dog walks
,and people can go on a date in the park
,chat with friends,eat a variety of foods
and buy dog walks
>>> The last time l went to the park was two days ago.
People can go on a date in the park.
They can also chat with friends, eat a variety of food and walk their dogs.
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