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학생이 쓴 원문
Because I studied only two language ... English and chinese.
If I must choice one, I will select chinese.
It can be personal feeling, chinese has more things to learn by heaet.
And It is difficult to pronounce because of intonation.
But If I become good at English, I want to study chinese too.
강사 첨삭
Happy February 1st! ^^
Thank you for this~
- T. Rina
1. Because I studied only two language ... English and chinese.
>> Because I studied only two languages, English and Chinese.
2. If I must choice one, I will select chinese.
>> Because I studied only two languages, English and Chinese.
2. If I must choice one, I will select chinese.
>> If I must choose one, I will select Chinese.
3. It can be personal feeling, chinese has more things to learn by heaet.
3. It can be personal feeling, chinese has more things to learn by heaet.
>> It can be a personal feeling but Chinese has more things to learn by heart.
4. And It is difficult to pronounce because of intonation.
4. And It is difficult to pronounce because of intonation.
>> And words are difficult to pronounce because of intonation.
5. But If I become good at English, I want to study chinese too.
5. But If I become good at English, I want to study chinese too.
>> But if I become good at English, I want to study Chinese too.
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