homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-Who do you admire the most and why?- (^-^)
I admire my parents
Because my mom is always working hard.
And my dad also always working hard for our family~^^
I love my family!!
강사 첨삭
Hello Jenny! I see how you cherish your family a lot. Good girl :)
~ Teacher Aki ^^
I admire my parents.
>> Correct.
OR: The people that I admire the most are my parents.
Because my mom is always working hard.
>> Correct.
OR: Because my mom always works hard.
And my dad also always working hard for our family~^^
>> And my dad also, is always working hard for our family.
OR: and my dad too. He always works hard for our family.
I love my family!!
>> Correct.
OR: I cherish my family.
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