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2021-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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What comes to your mind when you hear the words \"Covid-19\"? -> \'sadness\' comes to my mind when I hear the words \"Covid-19\". First, I was not allowed to play with my friends because of \'Covid-19\'. Second, I was too much bored in my house because of \'Covid-19\'. So, \'sadness\' comes to my mind when I hear the words \"Covid-19\".

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\'sadness\' comes to my mind when I hear the words \"Covid-19\".

>> Sadness comes to my mind when I hear the words \"Covid-19\".

First, I was not allowed to play with my friends because of \'Covid-19\'.

>>CORRECT

Second, I was too much bored in my house because of \'Covid-19\'.

>> Lastly, I get very bored in my house because of Covid-19.

So, \'sadness\' comes to my mind when I hear the words \"Covid-19

>> That\'s why I feel sadness when I hear these words.

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