homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It is positive.
These days, people think their thoughts are important.
So they want to live their life the way their think.
To choose their own life, they have a chance to think about themselves.
They can choose the right way to live.
Therefore I think it is positive.
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It is positive.
>>> CORRECT
These days, people think their thoughts are important.
These days, people think their thoughts are important.
>>> CORRECT
So they want to live their life the way their think.
So they want to live their life the way their think.
>>> So they want to live their life the way they wanted.
To choose their own life, they have a chance to think about themselves.
To choose their own life, they have a chance to think about themselves.
>>> CORRECT
They can choose the right way to live.
They can choose the right way to live.
>>> CORRECT
Therefore I think it is positive.
Therefore I think it is positive.
>>> CORRECT
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