HOMEWORK

Hello Jessy. Thank you for writing your composition. I agree that drinking alcohol is not good for our health. Let\'s drink water instead. :) 

~Teacher Aki ^^

I think that drinking is bad for health.

>> I think drinking alcohol is bad for one\'s health.

 it makes people excited and makes mistakes .

>> It makes people get excited and commit mistakes.

especially alchol in it hurts briain and so aging comes quickly.

>> Especially alcohol, it affects the brain and speeds up the aging process.

It is said that if you drink a lot of for a long time, dementia comes quckly.

>> Experts said that if you drink a lot of alcohol for a long time, it causes dementia.

OR: Excessive drink of alcohol may cause dementia.

so I don\'t recommend it to you.

>> So I am not recommending it to you.