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I don\' know, becuse peoples can be born on leap days.
becus they can grow 1 years old by four years.
or they can\'t becuse a leap day is only once of a avry four years .
so I think it can
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Hello Ruby!
I think you are right, they can be happy or unhappy. But maybe when they get older, they can be happy because not many old people want to be old. ^ ^
-Rachel
I don\' know, becuse peoples can be born on leap days.
>> I don\'t know if people born on leap days are happy or not.
becus they can grow 1 years old by four years.
becus they can grow 1 years old by four years.
>> Maybe they are happy because they can only get a year older every four years.
or they can\'t becuse a leap day is only once of a avry four years .
or they can\'t becuse a leap day is only once of a avry four years .
>> But they can also be unhappy because they can get older every four years.
so I think it can
so I think it can
>> So I guess they can be happy or unhappy.
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