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What do you do when you feel demotivated?
I do Internet or I play some computer or mobile games when I feel demotivated.
First, there are lots of interesting things in the Internet, so I can\'t feel demotivated.
Second, it\'s very fun to play some computer or mobile games, so I can\'t feel demotivated.
So, I do Internet or I play some computer or mobile games when I feel demotivated.
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First, there are lots of interesting things in the Internet, so I can\'t feel demotivated.
Second, it\'s very fun to play some computer or mobile games, so I can\'t feel demotivated.
So, I do Internet or I play some computer or mobile games when I feel demotivated.
I do Internet or I play some computer or mobile games when I feel demotivated.
> >I use the internet or play mobile and computer games when I feel demotivated.
First, there are lots of interesting things in the Internet, so I can\'t feel demotivated.
>>CORRECT
Second, it\'s very fun to play some computer or mobile games, so I can\'t feel demotivated.
>>Second, it\'s very fun to play some computer or mobile games.
So, I do Internet or I play some computer or mobile games when I feel demotivated.
>> So I do these thing to not feel demotivated.
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