homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It is a little bit of a positive development.
We can\'t meet people completely because of the Corona virus.
So we use online more than face to face.
But sometimes we have to meet face to face.
There\'s a limit to online.
And if we do it online more, we can get depressed.
Therefore sometimes it would be better to meet face to face than online.
강사 첨삭
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
It is a little bit of a positive development.
>>> CORRECT
We can\'t meet people completely because of the Corona virus.
We can\'t meet people completely because of the Corona virus.
>>> CORRECT
So we use online more than face to face.
So we use online more than face to face.
>>> CORRECT
But sometimes we have to meet face to face.
But sometimes we have to meet face to face.
>>> CORRECT
There\'s a limit to online.
There\'s a limit to online.
>>> There\'s a limitation online.
And if we do it online more, we can get depressed.
And if we do it online more, we can get depressed.
>>> And if we do more online classes, we can be depressed.
Therefore sometimes it would be better to meet face to face than online.
Therefore sometimes it would be better to meet face to face than online.
>>> CORRECT
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