homework

2021-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

Write a short story about your birthday last month I gave the thank you cards to my parents~ And I ate 미역국 It was very delicious!!^^ Beacause my mom was very good at cook! And I had to take a school uniform with my friend^^ And I went to my academy!!^^

강사 첨삭

Hi Jenny! Wow, that is so sweet of you that you even gave a card to your parents on your birthday. Stay well and happy \"_

~Teacher Aki^^

I gave the thank you cards to my parents~
>> I gave a \"Thank You\" card to my parents.
And I ate 미역국

>> I ate seaweed soup.

OR: I had a bowl of seaweed soup.
It was very delicious!!^^

>> CORRECT

OR: It was perfect!
 Beacause my mom was very good at cook!

>> Because my mom is a very good cook.

OR: Because my mom is good at cooking.
 And I had to take a school uniform with my friend^^

>> And I had to get my school uniform with my friend.
 And I went to my academy!!^^

>> Then I went straight to my academy.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·