homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenny! Wow, that is so sweet of you that you even gave a card to your parents on your birthday. Stay well and happy \"_
~Teacher Aki^^
I gave the thank you cards to my parents~
>> I gave a \"Thank You\" card to my parents.
And I ate 미역국
>> I ate seaweed soup.
OR: I had a bowl of seaweed soup.
It was very delicious!!^^
>> CORRECT
OR: It was perfect!
Beacause my mom was very good at cook!
>> Because my mom is a very good cook.
OR: Because my mom is good at cooking.
And I had to take a school uniform with my friend^^
>> And I had to get my school uniform with my friend.
And I went to my academy!!^^
>> Then I went straight to my academy.
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