homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I will give you a chance to choose a present: A smart phone or tickets to an Amusement Park.
choose wisely and why?
I will choose smart phone
Beacause it is my hope...^^
Other friends have smartphone...But I don\'t have anything...
So I will choose smrtphone!!^^
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name], I knew it! You would definitely choose that. Who knows?? your mom might change her mind and she\'ll get you one before you became an adult. Cheer up.
~Teacher Aki^^
I will choose smart phone
>>I will choose a smart phone.
Beacause it is my hope...^^
>> Because I have been hoping for it.
OR: Because I have been wishing for it.
Other friends have smartphone...But I don\'t have anything...
>> My other friends have a smartphone but I don\'t have one yet.
So I will choose smrtphone!!^^
>> So I chose a smartphone.
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