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I think it is good because martial arts protect people when they need help and it is often for fun.
but I think martial arts are very usful for all people.
and it can make us healthy when you pratice maltial arts.
so I think martial arts are inportent for women also.
thank you ^^
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Hello Ruby!
I agree that martial arts are important in everyday life and it is also important for women to protect themselves from bad people.
-Rachel
I think it is good because martial arts protect people when they need help and it is often for fun.
>> correct (we just say, it is often done for fun)
but I think martial arts are very usful for all people.
but I think martial arts are very usful for all people.
>> But I think martial arts is very useful for all people.
and it can make us healthy when you pratice maltial arts.
and it can make us healthy when you pratice maltial arts.
>> And it can make us healthy when we practice martial arts.
so I think martial arts are inportent for women also.
so I think martial arts are inportent for women also.
>> So I think martial are important especially for women.
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