homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Aside from money, what present do you want to receive this Lunar Holidays?
I want to receive a dog or a smartphone for the present^^
Because I really want to have dog!!
Dog is very cute and It makes me happy~!!
Smartphone is need to me.....
So I want to receive a dog or smartphone!^^
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name]! Thank you for diligently working on your homework. I also hope that you will get one of your wishes. Stay happy.
~Teacher Aki :)
I want to receive a dog or a smartphone for the present^^
>> I want to receive a dog or a smartphone as presents.
Because I really want to have dog!!
>> Because I really want to have a dog.
OR: Because I really want to own a dog.
Dog is very cute and It makes me happy~!!
>> A dog is very cute and it makes me happy.
Smartphone is need to me.....
>> Smartphone is a \"need\" for me.
So I want to receive a dog or smartphone!^^
>> So I want to receive a dog or a smartphone.
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