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Jenny! That would inspire you to love going to school everyday. Hope the pandemic ends so you could really enjoy the middle school life :)
~Teacher Aki^^
First, my new middle school has lots of facility near from school
>> First, my new middle school has a lot of different facilities nearby.
They have food store, juicy,macarong,hospital,china food store,drugstore,hambugger store,ice cream store, bread store!!
>> They have different food stores of juice, macarons, ice cream, bread. etc... They also have a Chinese store, drugstore and a nearby hospital.
And the school is very clean!! Also it is very large~~^^
>> The school is very clean and large!
So I m expect my new middle school life~!!^^
>> So I am excited for my middle school life.
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