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when we study at class and lening things with others at school was the best part.
they ware good friends.
but at the new school things will cainge.
I will have many friends and play with them.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ruby!
I am sure, you will have good things happening at your new school, and I know you will make many friends. ^ ^
-Rachel
when we study at class and lening things with others at school was the best part.
>> When we study in class and learn things with others at school, these are the best parts.
they ware good friends.
they ware good friends.
>> They were also good friends.
but at the new school things will cainge.
but at the new school things will cainge.
>> But in my new school, things will change.
I will have many friends and play with them.
I will have many friends and play with them.
>> correct
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