HOMEWORK
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If you could be a celebrity for a day, which celebrity would you be?
-> If I could be a celebrity for a day, I want to be a rapper for a day.
First, If I am famous rapper, I can meet many famous rappers.
So I can get a lots of skills about rapping from many famous rappers.
Second, If I am famous rapper, lots of people will know me.
If many people know me, I\'ll be proud of myself.
So if I could be a celebrity for a day, I want to be a rapper for a day.
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First, If I am famous rapper, I can meet many famous rappers.
So I can get a lots of skills about rapping from many famous rappers.
Second, If I am famous rapper, lots of people will know me.
If many people know me, I\'ll be proud of myself.
So if I could be a celebrity for a day, I want to be a rapper for a day.
If I could be a celebrity for a day, I want to be a rapper for a day.
>>If I could be a celebrity for a day, I want to be a rapper.
First, If I am famous rapper, I can meet many famous rappers.
>> If I am famous rapper, I can meet other famous rappers too.
So I can get a lots of skills about rapping from many famous rappers.
>> I can get a lot of skills and tips from other famous rappers.
Second, If I am famous rapper, lots of people will know me.
>> If I am famous rapper, lots of people will know me.
If many people know me, I\'ll be proud of myself.
>> CORRECT
So if I could be a celebrity for a day, I want to be a rapper for a day.
>> So I would want to be a rapper for a day.
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