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What are you most looking forward to this Seollal?
-> I am most looking forward to a money or gift from my parents and cousins this Seollal.
First, in Korea, we get a money or gift from our parents or cousins on Seollal.
Second, we can feel happy if we get a money or gift.
So I am most looking forward to a money or gift from my parents and cousins this Seollal.
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I am most looking forward to a money or gift from my parents and cousins this Seollal.
First, in Korea, we get a money or gift from our parents or cousins on Seollal.
Second, we can feel happy if we get a money or gift.
So I am most looking forward to a money or gift from my parents and cousins this Seollal.
>> What I am looking forward to the most this Seollal is receiving money and gifts from my relatives.
First, in Korea, we get a money or gift from our parents or cousins on Seollal.
>> It is a tradition here in Korea to give gifts and money to children.
Second, we can feel happy if we get a money or gift.
>> We feel happy every time this happens.
So I am most looking forward to a money or gift from my parents and cousins this Seollal.
>> That is what I\'m looking forward to the most this Seollal.
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