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Hmm.. My best part of holiday was when it was a new year. My uncle came to my house and played with me. I ate a lot of yummy foooooooods!!
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Hmm.. My best part of holiday was when it was a new year.
>> The best part of the holiday for me was when it was the new year.
My uncle came to my house and played with me.
>> Correct.
I ate a lot of yummy foooooooods!!
>> I ate a lot of yummy food!!
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