homework &

2012-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

1. When did you see your sister? 2. I saw her two days ago. 3. He didn't come to the meeting on Wednesday because he was on holiday. 4. Where did you go for vacation?? 5. How long takes you to eat all of those pies? Hi teacher Cam~ I had a mistake last class. Acutually I always do it. I said "I will do homework." but It was not the sentence that I wanted to say. I could not express what I want to say in our conversation. I want to say that so I will do it for homework for tomorrow. We had conversation about that why I wake up early. I said, "I went to my work place by train. It takes two hours." Actually, it takes 10 min. But the train to work does not come frequently. I have to leave home early to meet the train time. Usually I take the train at 7:06.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], thank you once again for dropping in your composition and making your homework today..^^ I always appreciate you writing a composition though you\'re very busy. And about our class last night, I wanna say thank you as well for telling me something about your mistake. I really thought you were talking about doing your homework today so I said yes, thank you so much for that. I think you must leave your house early so you could catch the train on time.kkk.. By the way, just read and study some modifications I made on your composition Miss. [Name]. Talk to you again later my dear.. Teacher Cam^^ 1. When did you see your sister? >>correct!2. I saw her two days ago. >>correct!3. He didn\'t come to the meeting on Wednesday because he was on holiday. >>correct!4. Where did you go for vacation?? >>correct!5. How long takes you to eat all of those pies?>>correct!Hi teacher Cam~I had a mistake last class. >>I had mistake last night in our class. Acutually I always do it. >>Actually,I always do.I said \"I will do homework.\" >>correct! >>I said I will do my homework.but It was not the sentence that I wanted to say. >>correct!I could not express what I want to say in our conversation. >>correct!I want to say that so I will do it for homework for tomorrow.>>What I wanted to say was I will write it on my homework tomorrow.We had conversation about that why I wake up early. >>We had a conversation why I had to wake up so early.I said, \"I went to my work place by train. >>correct!It takes two hours.\" >>correct!Actually, it takes 10 min. >>correct!But the train to work does not come frequently. >>correct!I have to leave home early to meet the train time. >>I have to leave my house early to catch the train on time.Usually I take the train at 7:06. >>correct!

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·