homework
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What do you think is the best technology ever developed?
I think it is computer!!
Beacause it can play games and watching the video or doing a homework too~!!
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I think it is computer!!
>> I think the computer is the best technology ever developed.
Beacause it can play games and watching the video or doing a homework too~!!
>> Because I can do a lot of things with it like playing games, watching some videos and helps me do my homework too.
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