homework
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What are the things you expect for this new year?
I will come to Korea this year in May, And I\'m still working. Maybe then I have not much time,
so when I live in America, I want to study English hard, and I want to take care my daughter well.
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I will come to Korea this year in May, And I\'m still working.
>> I will come back to Korea this May. I\'m working on it.
Maybe then I have not much time,so when I live in America, I want to study English hard, and I want to take care my daughter well.
>> I don\'t have that much time left so while I\'m staying here in America, I want to study English very hard and take care of my daughter at the same time.
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