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What is something that\'s not yet existing but you want to be invented?
-> I want to be invented a hydrogen energy generator.
First, we can save Earth\'s environments for using hydrogen energy.
Second, using hydrogen energy is better than using thermal power generation.
So I want to be invented a hydrogen energy generator.
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First, we can save Earth\'s environments for using hydrogen energy.
Second, using hydrogen energy is better than using thermal power generation.
So I want to be invented a hydrogen energy generator.
I want to be invented a hydrogen energy generator.
>> I want a hydrogen energy generator to be invented.
First, we can save Earth\'s environments for using hydrogen energy.
>> First, we can save Earth\'s environment using hydrogen energy.
Second, using hydrogen energy is better than using thermal power generation.
>>CORRECT
So I want to be invented a hydrogen energy generator.
>> That\'s why I want a hydrogen energy generator to be invented.
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