homework
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What kind of souvenir do you prefer to keep when traveling? Is it a photo or a souvenir item?
I prefer souvenir item~!!
But I also prefer photo too!!^^
Because... photos are my rmemories and souvenir items are very pretty and they are also memories~^^
강사 첨삭
Jenny~ The best keepsake that won\'t be erased is the memories in your heart. Always have fun when you go somewhere:)
~Teacher Aki ^^
I prefer souvenir item~!!
>> I prefer a souvenir item.
OR: I always go with souvenir items.
But I also prefer photo too!!^^
>> But I prefer photos too!
Because... photos are my rmemories and souvenir items are very pretty and they are also memories~^^
>> Because photos are for my memories and souvenir items are usually very pretty which also can be a keepsake.
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