homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Is there a piece of technology that you really want to exist? (i.e. flying cars, teleportation, etc.)
I really want to have a flying car~!!^^
Because my dream is flying~=)
So I want to bird\'s feeling by take a flying car
강사 첨삭
Jenny, another good job today for doing your homework. Keep it up.
~Teacher Aki ^^
I really want to have a flying car~!!^^
>> Correct.
OR: How I wish that flying cars will be invented soon.
Because my dream is flying~=)
>> Because I\'m dreaming of flying.
So I want to bird\'s feeling by take a flying car
>> So I want to feel how the bird\'s feel with a flying car.
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