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2021-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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I can play with them but I have no time . and I don\'t want to play with them . I am scared of big dogs and dogs that have sharp teeth to bite. and my mom and dad will not be very happy . and thats why don\'t want to play with dogs🐚🌜🐩 thank you✨

강사 첨삭

Hello Ruby!
I think big animals with sharp teeth are scary to play with, but there are actually big dogs who are gentle.^ ^
-Rachel
I can play with them but I have no time.
>> correct
and I don\'t want to play with them .
>> correct
I am scared of big dogs and dogs that have sharp teeth to bite.
>> correct
>> OR: I am scared of big dogs and also ones who have sharp teeth.
and my mom and dad will not be very happy .
>> correct
and thats why don\'t want to play with dogs and cats

>> That\'s why we don\'t want to play with dogs and cats.

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