homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the advantages/disadvantages of taking risks?
As I said investment, It have a advantage and disadvantage.
many people get a funds, the fund advantage is get a lot of money, but disadvantage thing is lost a lot of money and It is addictive,
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Bi! I agree with you. Making investments really are big risks. Anywayd, thank you for doing your homework! :)
Here are my corrections.
-Teacher Elise
As I said investment, It have a advantage and disadvantage.
>> As I have said, investing is a big risk. It had both advantages and disadvantages.
many people get a funds,
>> Many people get funds from this.
the fund advantage is get a lot of money, but disadvantage thing is lost a lot of money and It is addictive,
>> The advantage is that there\'s a chance that you\'ll earn money and the disadvantages are you can loose money and it\'s addicting.
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