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Is there a kind of music that you would never listen to?
-I never listen to loud music. ex) hiphop, edm ..
because these make me feel crazy. and Korea hiphop, they use a lot of swear word.
So i hate hiphop, I never listen to hiphop.
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Hi, Hazel! Thank you so much for having the time to answer the question. Here are some corrections that could help you more in constructing your thoughts. :) Talk to you next time! :)
~ T. Camille
>> CORRECT!
-I never listen to loud music.
>> I never listen to loud music.
ex) hiphop, edm ..
>> The examples of loud music are Hip-hop and EDM.
because these make me feel crazy.
>> The reason why I don\'t listen to it, is because these kinds of music make me feel crazy.
and Korea hiphop, they use a lot of swear word.
>> As for Korean Hip-hop, artists use a lot of swear words.
OR >> As for Korean Hip-hop, artists use a lot of profane words.
OR >> As for Korean Hip-hop, artists use a lot of profane words.
So i hate hiphop, I never listen to hiphop.
>> That is the reason why I hate Hip-hop, and I don\'t listen to Hip-hop.
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