Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
here are three gasses mainly responsible for global warming.
Carbon dioxide, water vapor and methane.
Methane is a far more powerful greenhouse gas than carbon dioxide.
A lot of methane is generated by rearing animals for meat. Should we all eat less meat?
Haha, I think that nobody will stop eating meat.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I actually agree unless there is a deadly virus in the meat then the animals would go extinct.
But yes that is highly unlikely.
Have a nice day!
Haha, I think that nobody will stop eating meat.
>>CORRECT
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