homework
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Jenny, Thank you for showing interest in making your homework. Keep it up :)
~Teacher Aki
Sure...
>> Yes, sibling rivalry is an issue in my country.
Lots of parents more prefer the smart children than not very clever children.
>> Lots of parents prefer their smarter children over the unclever ones.
As a results lots of children without their parents grow badly
>> As a result, a lot of children grow badly because of lack of affection from their parents.
So All parents have to love balance..!!!
>> So all parents must love their children fairly.
It is so important for growing children~!^^
>> It is very important for growing children.
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