HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What food makes you feel at home and why is it special?
-> Kimchi make me feel at home.
First, Most of the time when I am eating rice at home, I eat Kimchi.
Second, we make Kimchi our selves, and I think our Kimchi is delicious.
That\'s why Kimchi make me feel at home.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Wow! That sounds delicious. I wish I could also have a taste of your homemade kimchi. Anyways, thank you for sharing.
Anyways, thank you for sharing your experience.
Second, we make Kimchi our selves, and I think our Kimchi is delicious.
That\'s why Kimchi make me feel at home.
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Kimchi make me feel at home.
>> Kimchi makes me feel at home.
First, Most of the time when I am eating rice at home, I eat Kimchi.
>> Most of the time that I eat rice at home, I eat kimchi as well.
Second, we make Kimchi our selves, and I think our Kimchi is delicious.
>> We make kimchi ourselves and it\'s very delicious.
That\'s why Kimchi make me feel at home.
>> That\'s why kimchi makes me feel at home.
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